The earth under me quakes. The sky above me falls. It rains down on me. Pain explodes inside my head. My ribs break. I am crushed.
A deafening rumble offends my ears. My body is tossed and crumpled, battered by debris. It goes on for an eternity.
And then...
Silence. Stillness.
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A powerful description. I could feel the destruction of the castle.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant description. And then? The silence. Excellent hook.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant description. And then? The silence. Excellent hook.
ReplyDeleteWow! Awesome. Pulls you into the characters panic and pain.
ReplyDeleteOuch. Definitely not a good way to go. But great writing for sure! ;)
ReplyDeleteHow can you possible get your POV hero out of this jam?
ReplyDeleteThe silence at the end, very powerful. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteAhhh! Not good not good! Here's hoping something helpful comes along, and fast!
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